Can you describe this image? Use all of your language skills to create a poem with four verses.
Please include the following: a simile, a metaphor and personification.
Create atmosphere and aim to include effective vocabulary.
WAGOLL
In the deep dense forest a small figure appears
and a girl can be seen. She looks tiny against the tall trees.
Her face is hidden by the hood of her bright red cloak,
which is blowing behind her in the torrent of wind.
The girl rushing to get through the trees,
her trail is hidden as she almost floats through the forest trying not to be seen.
The light is dim, and everywhere seems cold and eerie;
mist begins to settle on the ground.
The trees seem to be murmuring to themselves
swirls of gusty wind twirl between them.
You can almost imagine them alive
trying to protect the mystery red figure.
Suddenly, eye of a wolf peers through the branches
watching, thinking and planning his next move.
The dark shade of the trees
Coated the the girl where she stood,
She wears a famous blood red hood
You can hear her whistle
But the shade of the night steals her tune,
Her face turns white by the look of the moon
She dares to travel on;
a sharp smile lurks onwards through the trees
looking for a feast, a delicious meal
The faster she runs her heart beats fast
Like the flame, a river or a big gulp
And up behind her comes a predator Known to all as ‘wolf’
Her eyes threw out tremendous waterfalls of tears
Then came a light of fire and spears
The wolf ran into the wind and howled as he went
Comments
KAT CRITCH
27 January 2019
In the dark eerie forest the trees stood towering,
Dancing and swooping their branches in the murky night,
A girl could be seen gliding across the olive green furry coat on the ground,
She looked so small against the colossal bark filled trees.
Her face was hidden deep into her red hooded cloak,
A ghostly wind blew the cloak behind her,
Soaring like a kite in the wind only not as high.
The air was damp and heavy,
A foggy mist making visibility difficult,
The only light being in the the distance
Like a light at the end of a tunnel
(Yet without one)
The girl in red flowed on,
Gently humming a mysterious tune,
Where was she going?nobody knows,
in the dark eerie forest the girl in red went gliding by...