Write a descriptive paragraph of this scene using no more than 100 words
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Think about
- vocabulary
- a variety of sentence starters
- punctuation (brackets, commas and dashes etc…)
Do NOT write a story!
Look at these examples of WAGOLL to help you.
In the midst of the castle, the aliens were taking everything, destroying anything that got in the way. That includes, of course, the actual outside, smashing turrets and knocking off tower tops. The sky was invaded with swarms of U.F.Os and spaceships, flying down to pick up the strange creatures below. In the distance, an enormous mountain could be seen, covered in great rocks the size of trees. Below it, there was a gigantic lake, glimmering in the soft glow of the sun through the trees…
Zeppelin like balloons hover menacingly around the city. On one side of the broad lake is an ancient megalopolis with dark towers and nightmarish buildings all fitting tightly together.
On the other side of the lake are colossal mountains – so high that only Sir Chris Bonington would be able to climb them. Towering on the mountains, are pillar-like rocks standing over 100 feet high. The sky is shining with a blinding light (with the rest of the sky a crimson red). It is acting like a massive lazer coming right towards the citizens of the doomed city.
In the midst of the alien invasion, the spaceships circle the city. The buildings crumble and the sun is setting for the last time under human rule before the aliens take over. Smoke billows from the ruined buildings into the smokey sky. The aliens circle before closing in and obliterating human life all over the world from London to LA. The aliens annihilate the houses, the monuments and the skyscrapers. The only life left is micro-organisms, slugs and of course cockroaches. The lake is polluted and dying, soon to join the rest of the dead world.
Comments
Francesca Grady
4 September 2018
Like stars in the sky, the lake shone. Millions of aircrafts were about in the ruby red sky. The aliens were carefully taking apart the country. Several eco things were being replaced by high-tech, energy wasting junk. Birds were escaping from the colossal balloons. Prisoners were taken to Africa to bake in the dessert sun.
In the distance, the beautiful mountains were remembering their last moment. No more happy memories would come after this day. Rocks were standing tall like towers. A castle stood in the distance. It looked freshly built through the cloud. Really the aliens were being monsters…
Nathan D
6 September 2018
People were running for their very lives as green omens of death rained from the sky on zip lines. Emerging from the thick canopy of grey clouds, U.F.Os circled the helpless city like a frenzy of sharks. Glimmering in the dying sun, the other-worldly spaceships cast colossal shadows on the terrified crowd below. In the distance, only the tall towers of the royal palace were undisturbed by the strange intergalactic foes.