Can you write a character description for one of the following characters: Emil Tischbein, Mr Grundeis, The Professor or Gustav?

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Mr.Grundies

Mr.Grundies (the man in the bowler hat) is a mysterious man. He wears black and has a jet black hat which makes him stand out from the crowd. He is a posh man who encountered Emil Tischbein on a train. He looks like a serious business man, and will probably not think twice before snatching someone’s money! He is a tall plump man reaching a height of ‘6.5’ and a weight of 12 stone. He is not someone you would want to get on the bad side of, although Emil Tiscbein is challenging him.

Name: Emil
Gender: Male
Age: 11

Emil is a quiet little boy who is well mannered, adventurous and very emotional about losing his 7 pounds. He is very courageous and doesn’t want to give up when his money is robbed by a loathsome man by the name of Mr. Grundeis. Emil wears a flat cap and has a grey suit with pants that don’t even touch his socks!

Mr Grundeis

Mr Grundeis is a mysterious man. He wears a jet black suit and dark,shiny shoes protrude from the ends of his long skinny legs. His face is long ; under his nose nestle the thick black curls of his moustache and at the top of his head is a dark bowler hat. He is a thief and very very cunning by targeting people who cannot defend themselves.

Emil Tischbein
Emil Tischbien is a young boy who so far in the story is going by train accompanied by Mr Grundeis on his way to his summer holiday trip with his aunty and grandma to Berlin. Emil is a nice boy who respects his mum but he can be mischievous as we learn from the story when he defaced the mayors monument. Emil wears his best jacket which he doesn’t like. His father died in war and his mum works in a hair dressers getting payed a low wage and can just about pay for Emil’s school fees.

Great use of PEE James to support your opinion. 

Mr. Grundeis
So far into the story, Mr. Grundeis is a shady and figure introduced when Emil Tischbein is travelling to Berlin on the train. Mr. Grundeis was sitting in the same compartment when Emil entered it. He looks middle-aged (actual age so far unknown) and has a thick, jet-black moustache and wears a small, round, dark bowler hat as well as wearing a long brown trench coat and stripy pants. Also, he is from Germany and has a vague German accent. As well as him acting suspicious, looking over his shoulder frequently, he seems to have a generous streak as he offers Emil chocolate on the train, but, again, it is still unknown whether that was just for show, or just to get Emil to trust him. He also has a sarcastic character as when on the train, he discovers that Emil was travelling to Berlin and was describing Berlin extremely sarcastically. 

Wow Alex I am blown away by your blog. It is obvious to me that you are listening to our class novel as you have written a very accurate description of Grundeis. Lots of PEE too. Brilliant effort. Prize Box!